Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently.
Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
Do grandparents need to live independently or do they need to live among their loved ones?
The answer to that depends on two major factors:
their cultural background,the environment around them,and the affordability of it.
Some think that grandparents are an essential part of the family and that they must live together;Not only true to the fact that they are their parents;But also,so they could receive emotional and psychological support that would help them face the process of aging.
On the other hand,people who argue for the elderly independence weigh their opinion on two facts.
First of which is that living independently helps build self-esteem and problem-solving skills that would also help the grandparents face the aging process,and make them able to overcome any obstacles that they might face.Second of which is that not all families could be able to afford to serve the grandparents,by either spending time with them,or helping them financially.
I think that if it is possible for the children to host their elderly parents in their homes among their grandchildren;It would be quite nice go do so.Although,needless to say, this matter is rather far more complicated than that,most of the time;As a lot of factors need to be put in mind beforehand,such as:the grandparents’ health conditions,and whether they themselves want to live with their children or not.
In conclusion, whether the grandparents live with their children or alone;Is dependant on the grandparents’,and the children’s conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51046025105 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61182153628 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589958158996 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.512662992 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.142857143 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229174218912 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114768213486 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648703246099 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101097576496 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708615597039 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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