Some companies sponsor sports and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In this increasingly competitive market, businesses force themselves to come up with innovative methods to build their brand. Among these, several companies have provided financial support for sports events and sports stars. While some people express their opposition to this action, others endorse it. This essay will explore both perspectives and present my strong agreement with the latter viewpoint.
On the one hand, opponents of business-funded sports may emphasize the inappropriate degree of influence firms impose on athletics. As the primary objective of every company is to achieve sound financial health, they will not simply sponsor sports stars unconditionally. In the contract, athletics will be required to engage in their advertisements to attract their supporters to buy the items, hence, their practice time will be reduced, negatively affecting their performance during the match. Additionally, effective advertising demands sports players maintain their fame, triggering a win-at-all-costs attitude among them. Some of them are likely to indulge in dubious activities such as the use of illegal drugs, and afterward destroy the genuine purpose of sports events.
On the other hand, despite the above-mentioned disadvantages, there are a number of positive effects on sports supporters and financial institutions themselves that justify the encouragement of business sponsorship. With regard to the business, this practice is obviously an effective marketing strategy. Interaction with customers is essential to a company’s long-term success. By titling themselves as one of the suppliers of one sports event, a firm is able to make a good impression on its fans and break into the sports market. Turning to the speculators, the sports tournament organizers might have a larger budget to provide additional entertainment activities surrounding sports events like selling drinks and hotdogs in a football match and hiring professional dancers to perform during the breaktime. This can enormously enhance the experience of sports fans coming to see the match in reality, making them appreciate their choice to buy the ticket to the stadium.
In conclusion, while business sponsorship may exert potential drawbacks, I am more inclined to the view that the benefits bear a greater significance. Specifically, such enormous expenses can be used to increase sales for the firms and improve the sport-viewing experience for supporters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72677595628 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20283847952 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609289617486 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5110632601 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.294117647 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228953002712 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720680701495 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472462095795 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13446350113 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307308390427 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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