Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？
There are countries pumping money for elite athletes equipments rather than public sports services. I believe such behavior has immensely positive effects on its local country.
First and forest, the country would benefit from training top athletes, as successful athletes adds glory to the country. Compared with amateur sports, competitive sports require professional training and guidance. If governments can offer customized facilities, with dedicated hours of practice and proper guidance, athletes are likely to win in global events. In international sports games, the Olympic Games for example, athletes are representatives of their home country, and if they can outcompete others in the competition, they will help build a positive country image, therefore promoting country’s reputation and international status.
What’s more, professional sports is a multi-million-pounds industry, which would help boost their country’s economic growth, and contribute to reaching international success. It is undoubted that Successful sportsmen could serve as advertisements of the country, thus attracting fans and tourists to visit their hometowns. When people travel to a country, they spend money on accommodations, foods and other purchases, giving rise to higher government revenue. However, such positive effect is missed out upon in public sports development. it is believed that international success, at its core, is economic success, so spending money on training elite athletes is greatly beneficial to achieve international success.
To conclude，it is wise for government to provide money for top sports, for the sake of nation’s reputation as well as economic growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0368852459 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3359749454 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5944516616 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234029618417 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827281162175 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580195315026 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130357248513 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674664655027 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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