Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In this contemporary era, it is a point of discussion that aged individuals should be allowed to work until any age they prefer. In my opinion, this will certainly have more advantages than disadvantages as discussed below in the essay.
To commence with, there are a myriad of reasons for permitting the aged section of society to work without any limitation of the age factor since it helps them continue being self-dependent on their financial decisions, instead of depending on their children and contributing towards society. Besides this, it keeps them occupied instead of feeling left alone in this fast-paced environment, which is one of the worst feelings that usually engulfs the older community at this age. For instance, the elderly public who earns and stays socially active encounter fewer mental problems and enjoy a better life. Thus, permitting senior residents to work irrespective of the age limit is beneficial for themselves and for society as a whole.
In spite of the various merits of allowing the older community to work without any age restrictions, there are also a few demerits of it. Firstly, it is believed that after a certain age an individual loses efficiency, enthusiasm and ability to think innovatively and maintain pace with evolving technological environment, which affects their work performance. Additionally, they tend to refuse to adapt to new technology and the changes necessitated in the dynamic world and therefore, hinder individual and the company’s growth. For example, about ten years ago, the adoption of computers and learning new technology was highly retaliated by older banking sector employees ,unlike youngsters.
To conclude, despite there being some negative sides to consenting the elderly population to work, it brings many benefits such as being self-reliant and contributing towards the nation. In my opinion, the advantages of letting the senior section of society far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...essay. To commence with, there are a myriad of reasons for permitting the aged sect...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asons for permitting the aged section of society to work without any limitation o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their children and contributing towards society. Besides this, it keeps them occ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mit is beneficial for themselves and for society as a whole. In spite of the v...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...liated by older banking sector employees ,unlike youngsters. To conclude, despi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03618476804 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5728991232 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217063944927 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769425037012 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065179422652 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134235041784 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544714212079 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...essay. To commence with, there are a myriad of reasons for permitting the aged sect...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asons for permitting the aged section of society to work without any limitation o...
^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their children and contributing towards society. Besides this, it keeps them occ...
^^
Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mit is beneficial for themselves and for society as a whole. In spite of the v...
^^
Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...liated by older banking sector employees ,unlike youngsters. To conclude, despi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03618476804 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5728991232 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217063944927 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769425037012 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065179422652 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134235041784 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544714212079 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.