Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s developing world, the retirement age has always been a protracted debate. When it comes to the age at which the elderly should quit their jobs, some people advocate that they should remain in employment whenever they want. From my point of view, although it is justifiable to some extent, I am convinced that there are more problems with this policy.
On the one hand, the benefits of letting old people work to any age they desire are somehow undeniable. It is obvious that it can ensure their financial ability. When they continue to be a part of the labor force, they can earn their own salary. In other words, they can be self-reliant in terms of finances without having to depend on their children. In the long run, it can bring a sense of freedom and accomplishment to the elderly, fostering self-worth and more open relationships with their offspring.
On the other hand, although the merits of abolishing the mandatory retirement age are inevitable, I believe that its demerits are more worth noticing. It cannot be denied that having workers at an older age may not ensure the productivity of the company. In terms of health, the elderly may suffer from a lack of physical stamina and some ailments including arthritis, diabetes, and etc. Moreover, they may not be able to catch up with the state-of-the-art technology as well as their younger counterparts due to old age. As a result, these concerns can potentially take their toll on the work output and the overall efficiency of the company.
In conclusion, despite some advantages brought to the elderly when they can work longer, I advocate that the disadvantages are more serious including the deterioration of work productivity.
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... the elderly when they can work longer, I advocate that the disadvantages are mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88022664668 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0068793077 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254517716755 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827168816122 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853132082794 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162385250635 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388201734569 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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