In some countries around the world, men and women are having children late in life.
What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
Many developed and underdeveloped nations, are where people are choosing to start their families at an older age. In my opinion, manifold reasons for this development assist the young generation in their early life, also having late parenthood have myriad merits which might be increased their happiness in other activities as compared to demerits it might bring.
To commence with, one obvious reason why people want to have a late child is that they thoroughly secured their financial conditions to raise their child easily. To elaborate, many people become parents at an early age without an understanding of how they earn in their period, due to this kind of problem will make a child and their future difficult and also they not fill the need of a family. Furthermore, another reason of born a child late is individuals can spend some time with their life partners, which helps them to understand each other. Consequently, they raised their child without any personal arguments.
On the one hand, the major benefit of being a child born later is that populace can concentrate on their career. In other words, Many people decide to achieve their goals first and earn the money they want, as well as they might have the desire to be in a high-position job in a company to fulfill their dreams. If they plan to be born to a child in their twenties, they might be distracted from their aim and not work hard for their career. As a result, it is detrimental to raising children also.
On the other hand, there are many drawbacks to having a child in later years. First of all, the age difference is long between parents and children and it might be creates several problems between them such as less communication and a lack of respect for the elders by children. Secondly, due to the late child being born, the mothers may have a bearing problem. when they give a born to a child which might be harmful to their physical health in the later years.
In recapitulation, there are multiple benefits for individuals to having children in their thirties like career goals and spending sufficient time with a life partner. I reckon that this can be a problem for parents in their later stages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, i reckon, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77690288714 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59831649604 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1301200214 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110704075001 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487439888354 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042947418349 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856528552031 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039110203975 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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