In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness
are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be
taken to solve them?
It is undeniably true that the human body fitness if is not sustained, it will effectively deteriorate. Many countries face the problem of increase in their citizen’s weight averagely and inverse can be seen in their health and fitness.
I believe, that there are two major factors contributing in these social issue. To start with, we live in the 21st century which is known as the modern era and due to the technology pavements which has made our daily life easy which reduces the manual efforts to 40% compared to past era. For instance, people generally use elevators to climb the floors instead to climbing which can be great exercise in order to maintain themselves. The second major reason is, the junk foods and canned products, aerated beverages are consumed by humans in highly manner in order cope up with their fast lives. However, these stored items adversely affect the human body as these piled up products are not fresh and do not have nutrients which human body needs.
Although, this is the serious global issue, we can define some measures to control this epidemic. On the one hand, the government could possibly setup campaigns to make awareness regarding to the health care issues. On the other hand, they can also continuously broadcast advertisements related to these problems and solutions on the Television or internet so that people can take necessary required actions.
To sum up, Despite of increase in people weight and decrease in their fitness, this problem can be resolved by the federals by creating awareness about the avoiding prevalent unhealthy foods and taking care of their health by regularly exercising.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...idemic. On the one hand, the government could possibly setup campaigns to make awareness regar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, for instance, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59745446809 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6739871471 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211687725348 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756814369724 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764779788767 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146226099589 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685164815659 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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