In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It has been proved that the number of over weights is increasing in some countries, and as a result, people are becoming less healthy and less fit. This situation was brought about by specific reasons, such as a change in the types of jobs and overusing fast food. Both families and governments should act to solve this issue by promoting exercise, even at the workplace, and observing the production of food supplies more seriously.
Undoubtedly, several factors have led to increasing the average weight. Firstly, technology has changed the staple lifestyle, which involves how various jobs are done. In fact, employees spend long hours sitting on their chairs since every task can be done by computers. This has caused less activity and losing robustness. For instance, a typical bank employee spends 8 hours sitting at the budget passively. Secondly, nowadays people tend to eat canned or fast food more often, as they do not have enough time to cook. It is for sure that overeating junk food harms their health and makes them gain weight more rapidly due to the high amounts of fat.
According to the problem, specific solutions could be practical. On the one hand, families and colleagues should encourage each other to stand up occasionally and do some simple exercises. This will help the muscles become active and the fat consumed so that they will not get overweight. For example, co-workers in a particular office can remind each other to do some simple stretches from time to time. On the other hand, the government should put food producer companies under more surveillance. In other words, introducing a strict set of rules for restaurant owners and food factories is beneficial. To illustrate the point, there can be regulations for owners of fast food restaurants on using specifically organic food in their dishes containing fresh ingredients.
In conclusion, although people are gaining weight more rapidly and becoming less healthy, specific actions must be taken to avoid worsening the situation and increase general well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14371257485 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72530752145 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61377245509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3851820839 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167704815259 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505426289532 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474450307047 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102202988847 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206939571555 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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