In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While the general weight of individual is rising, the quality of health and fitness is going down. This is the result of the uncontrolled eating and laziness of people, especially in developed countries. So in this essay, I will discuss about what are the reasons lead to these problems and the solution to stop it.
First of all, I guess the main reason for the overweigh of people is that they don’t follow any balanced diet. Some fried foods like fast food and junk foods have a lot of calories which can gain people weight. Also some store fry foods again and again in the same oil that can have negative effect to people health. But some people don’t know or care about that because they think that it’s convenient for them when they are busy and it’s very cheap to buy it. Another food can make people addicted is sweet foods like candy or chocolate. These foods have a high level of sugar inside which can make some people feel satisfy and they can’t stop themselves to eat. Furthemore, people can get diabetes when they eat many sugar.
Secondly, some people think that it’s unnechessary to do exercise. The reasons for this is people think food can get them enough energy to work for a day, so they don’t need to stretch their muscles. Some young people usually busy when they spend times to study or work so that they don’t have time to improve their health. Morever, some people feel lazy when it wastes their times and doesn’t exciting like they though.
In conclusion, with the development of technology and biology, people have more opportunities to improve their strenth. They should find out and have a balanced diet which suit for their body and gain their health. Also taking a schedule, going to the gym and doing some exercises to have a good health for ourself.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sugar seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much sugar', 'a good deal of sugar'.
Suggestion: much sugar; a good deal of sugar
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Suggestion: excite
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, while, i guess, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21625618193 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1718672083 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222345182017 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828830546907 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414671776728 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142741892063 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184285934736 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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