as mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In modern society, the mass communication and transport are increasing quickly, and societies are changing to a phenomenon, also be called globalisation. Some people worry that the globalisation will absolutely lead to the extinction of cultural identities. Personally, I partly agree with this statement so in this eassy, I will discuss about the reason and the relation of the mass communication and transport to the loss of cultural identity.
On the one hand, the mass communication is a convenient and easy way to knowledge about cultures from every countries. It is useful, but also can be dangerous when people learn about that and may forget about their culture. For example, my friend fought out something make she interested about the culture in Korea last year, she talked with me a lot of about their lifestyle, food, but when I asked her some history quizz, she said she did not know about that, although this is a easy question for primary student. So that is the moment when people choose another lifestyle as their daily routine, then they will forget their own culture, and when there are many people choose that, the cultural identity will be lost forever. The transportation also contribute for the loss when it is opportunity for people can leave their hometown, their country to live in the country they think suitable. So that is the disadvantages of the growth of the mass communication and transport.
However, the protect of cultural identity is the responsible of the govement and local people. The mass communication play an important role for the development of advertiment, and people can use it to introduce their cultural identity around the world. Also, the improvement of the transport such as plane, coach can be a perfect and ideal way to attract the foreign more closer to the cultural identity. So that the cultural identity will still hold the beaty and special of the country unless people do not act immeditely.
In conclusion, the mass communication and transport can be a threaten to the cultural identity, but it can be an opportunity to improve and share the culture around the world. In my opinion, people should find out ways to solve the issue and to show their respect to the ancient identity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d not know about that, although this is a easy question for primary student. So t...
^
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... communication and transport. However, the protect of cultural identity is the responsible...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...ct and ideal way to attract the foreign more closer to the cultural identity. So that the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mass communication and transport can be a threaten to the cultural identity, but it can be...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96021220159 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84413716712 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474801061008 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.427049846 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243707916011 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975812629643 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064099016754 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170379594791 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824652278341 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d not know about that, although this is a easy question for primary student. So t...
^
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... communication and transport. However, the protect of cultural identity is the responsible...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...ct and ideal way to attract the foreign more closer to the cultural identity. So that the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mass communication and transport can be a threaten to the cultural identity, but it can be...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96021220159 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84413716712 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474801061008 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.427049846 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243707916011 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975812629643 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064099016754 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170379594791 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824652278341 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.