In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them
The problem of increasing weight which was always debatable has now more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others disagree. However, the individuals from few countries are suffering from weight gaining problems which are destroying their in health and Fitness. This essay will explain 11 the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the loaming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays many youngsters like to eat fast food instead of homemade meal, which contain less nutritious and more sugar. Besides, most of the young people are unable to maintain healthy lifestyle due to the busy life. For example, many jobholders have no time to make fresh food in home and unable to do any kinds of physical exercise. As a result, they are facing obesity along with many diseases much as diabetes, cancer, heart attack, eye problems. Therefore, it is clear that above the reasons are spoliating body and mind through rising weight.
On the other hand, there are some solutions to prevent this situation. moreover, if individuals maintain a healthy, diet plan, it can be reduced weight and to eat most of the diseases. For instance, the population of Japan and China always try green fresh vegetables instead of meat or fish as well as junk food. Due to the fact that they can live a long life and keep fit till older age. However,
more physical exercise also helps to keep Fit such as jumping, running, cycling, swimming. Thus, these solutions are more effective to tackle this trend.
To sum up, according to the arguments one can reach to a conclusion that the hazards of gaining weight are to dire too ignore. However, everyone should be concerned to prevent this situation to maintain healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
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Message: Did you mean 'to ignore'?
Suggestion: to ignore
...e hazards of gaining weight are to dire too ignore. However, everyone should be concerned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0409556314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54507295745 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8318564298 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3125 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120910426142 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354171346839 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361267784284 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607736669764 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452460800864 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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