In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
Obesity is considered to be one of the most dangerous things that several countries are suffering from. Increased weight of the citizens has an adverse effect on peoples health and fitness. In this essay, I will outline some of the causes of this matter and propose several solutions that could be taken to tackle this issue.
One one hand, people are the ones responsible for their increased weight and this can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, people are consuming more and more unhealthy food. Employees, for example, order fast food for lunch on a daily basis. Secondly, the amount of time that people spend on doing any kind of physical activity is decreasing. People are not going out of their homes like they used to do before. They would prefer to watch a movie and eat unhealthy snacks than going out outside and doing their favourite hobbys with their friends. Last but not least, there is a huge responsibility that is put on the shoulders of food companies. The ingredients used in most of the products are not natural and are filled with many bad chemicals and food sweeteners.
There are several solutions that could be done to encounter this important problem. First of all, governments need to regulate and form strict laws on food manufacturing companies. They should limit the use of artificial ingredients and use natural ones instead. Additionally, governments must impose a high tax on the establishment of fast food shops and restaurants. This would discourage business people to open new shops that serve unhealthy food. Second of all, the ministry of education should coördinate with schools kitchens’ to cook healthy food for students. As most students spend most of their times in the school, hence if served unhealthy food all the time, they would definitely gain more weight.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are several factors contributing to people gaining more weight; however, many interventions can be done, especially by the government, to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09009009009 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75595518517 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6693443005 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174079047504 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530892327875 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645477050018 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108764791671 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521182543886 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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