In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It cannot be denied that in some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. In this regard, some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. This essay will discuss reason why i strongly disagree.
It is true that the government responsibility is to ensure the well being of people. However, the well being of children is largely depend on their parent. Every parent should have enough knowledge about healthy diet. For example: parent should encourage their child to eat more vegetable rather than chips and candy.
On the other hand, obesity is also caused by lack of physical activity. Children nowadays get lazier, they do not walk to school and whenever they get home, they sit in front of television and computer games. Not only it has detrimental effect on their vision but also allows the minors to have more chances of accessing junk food. This may eventually lead to negative eating habit
In conclusion, the government and parent both have their role in taking care of the well being of their child. However, the responsibility is largely depend on parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05913978495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56105918804 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9806340482 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4166666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315519723353 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118982168073 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161309760313 0.0667982634062 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199947071243 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211007259907 0.056905535591 371% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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