In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, due to the fast-pace development of the civilization, it has led to many problems ranging from technology to social concerns. However, the age gap between parents and their children seems to be one of the most worrying issues which influences the bonds on families as it has become gradually wider as time goes by. Although the emergence of this phenomenon is beneficial for members in families, I personally believe that its downsides are much concerning.
For a variety of reasons, the disadvantageous aspects tend to come from mothers giving birth late. This would place negative impacts on mothers’ health during the period of having pregnancy as the human body is biologically programmed to deteriorate over time resulting in their organs to be less functional than they used to be earlier. To be specific, during the process of delivering a baby, it requires the mothers a great force of strength to push the baby out of the uterus. Therefore, it seems to be life-threatening for the mothers as they tend to be feeble leading to a high mortality rate. The second drawback is that it would be dreadful for the newborns. Biologically, since the fetus absorbs nutritional substances from the mothers’ body, however, when their parents’ reproductive cells become less effective due to aging, the fetal development will be impacted as it is not fully supplied with a sufficient amount of nutrition values from their mothers. As a consequence, the construction of the babies’ immune system would be ineffective resulting in being more prone to common ailments and mental impairment.
Having said that, looking from a social perspective, the disparity between generations in a family can still be advantageous to a certain extent. The first upside is that giving birth at an old age offers a more stable financial condition which will be an upper hand for parents as well as their children later in life. This is because people who want to achieve financial independence would spend their youth laboring around to work industriously to be well-prepared for future stages. Consequently, this stability will provide their children with better living conditions along with more chances to get access to quality education and healthcare which assist them in having more occupational opportunities when seeking for jobs. Admittedly, in spite of having such a stable financial situation might be fruitful, not every family are wealthy enough to nurture a child since parents as they were young, they may not have any motivation to move forwards. As a result, if they are not financially stable as they get old, it will exacerbate the situation when having a baby since raising a child demands various large expenses while there are much more crucial aspects for their parents to pay attention to.
Taking everything into consideration, the multidimensional perspective as examined in this essay has consolidated my argument that even though this age gap can bring children better living standards thanks to the achievements of their parents, threats on the survival of the mothers as well as the development of the infants are much more noticeable.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2658.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1511627907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99545957713 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536821705426 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8699324978 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.352941176 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3529411765 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0743294040555 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267802641258 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297360481693 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527048899406 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235913727824 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2658.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1511627907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99545957713 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536821705426 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8699324978 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.352941176 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3529411765 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0743294040555 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267802641258 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297360481693 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527048899406 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235913727824 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.