Nowadays, part-time job for teenagers is a popular phenomen. The world devided in two opinions about it. Some contries promote this option to obtain own money for teenagers and others who totally disagree with this method. This essay will discuss both of the views.
I think that these countries wich encourage adolescents to take a part-time job, ensured all the conditions to make it secured and without any possibility to abandon the school hours. Also, these teenagers can help their parents with some financial problems that can be present in each family. Another reason for allowing children to work in their fee rime is that they know how it is to make their own salary and they will know the difficulties of mature life.
Another part of the world think taht teenagers must no work during the school. In my opnion, parents that do not give the permission to their children to have a part-time job, think that he/she would decrease at school or maybe he/she would abandon the middle education. Another reason of this disagree could be early growing up. Somee parents are focus on the happiest childhood of their adolescents.
To conclude, some countries promote a part-time job among teenagers because the state can offer condions of their security. The second part of population consider that adolescents do not need to work because of early growing up or the pssibility of school abandon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... both of the views. I think that these countries wich encourage adolescents to take a pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96170212766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50619874336 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3394395241 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235388133695 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839533042227 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629392372947 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145273526096 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368464387163 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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