In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is good for the country, while other believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this fast-growing competitive epoch, all individual are pursuing a job to live a better lifestyle. In numerous nations, employees are paid higher remuneration. In this matter, proponents declare that this approach is good for the countries, in contrast critics argue that earnings and should be controlled by government of respective territories. After a close scrutiny of both the aspects, i opine that government of the country should impose rulesets for salary structure that each and every person would get their compensation considering their years of experience. This view shall be elaborated upon in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, at the outset, there are numerous reasons why some people in favour with pay higher salaries but the kost conspicuous stems from the fact that it provides motivation as well as recognisation to employees. In addition, more the salary emoloy have the more tax will be collected. As a consequence, economy of a country get credited with better growth prospects. To cite an ideal example, workers of a company named Hitachi are offered higher pay in order to develope economic growth through tax factor.
However, many people conceive that goverment should curb the compensation. Due to the higher payment, employs of the companies tend to migrate to another nation in order to get appreciation of their skills. In this manner, economy of a territory starts to fall due to the migrating behaviours of mankind of native country. For and instance, in 2016, the compensation structure of L&T technology services, an indian company, had been transformed and adopted the uniform salary scale in order to recruit more workers for the industry.
To support my openion, employs get paid salaries according to their education qualification and years of experience. Hence, it will not creat any discrimination among employs.
To put it in a Nutshell, all the government as well as private firms and companies should obtain a uniform pay scale hierarchy in order to get salaried each and every individual with taking the considerations such as field experience and schooling qualifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, well, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17404129794 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91032514156 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 339.0 20.2975951904 1670% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1754.0 106.682146367 1644% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 339.0 20.7667163134 1632% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 7.06120827912 1473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223753557071 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223753557071 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105934898243 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623414169868 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 172.4 13.0946893788 1317% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -281.07 50.2224549098 -560% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 136.7 11.3001002004 1210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.88 8.58950901804 290% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 137.6 10.1190380762 1360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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