In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is good for the country, while other believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been seen in some nations, small population of citizen earn high emolument. Some people think that this is propitious for country while other argue that government of such nation should intervene in this matter and cap humongous remuneration of people. However, I confer both fossettes and give my impression for the same.
In any nation, employees are paid for their knowledge, skill set and hard work and because of that, citizen could get higher payment for their work however capping of salaries of these people cause many consequences. Foremost result would be lack of motivation and enthusiasm in individual as government is arresting stipends. Second would be migration of working youth to other countries because of less income even though they are doing good job. For example, In U.K. where government regulate remuneration of employee, reported increase in foreign migration from 8% to whopping 35% over the last 80 years.
Paying more money to any employee because they have required accomplishment and consciousness in succession, motivate and encourage people to acquire education and pursue higher degrees. Even Country is benefited because of such employment as nation will get higher taxes which intern helps to improve country’s infra structure to benefit citizen of country. Moreover, people getting higher stipend do social work and contribute to society for development of poor as well as needy people.
To put it in a nutshell after reviewing both the views, I personally think that limiting individual salary is not a good option even though some people support that view as advantages of second view overweighs disadvantages of initial view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21804511278 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015428846 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 266.0 20.2975951904 1311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1388.0 106.682146367 1301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 266.0 20.7667163134 1281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 78.0 7.06120827912 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370206567269 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.370206567269 0.084324248473 439% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228677445732 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103739639601 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.2 13.0946893788 1040% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.51 50.2224549098 -395% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 11.3001002004 947% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.1 8.58950901804 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.4 10.1190380762 1071% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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