Nowadays, population is augmenting perpetually which becomes colossal crisis not only for developing nations, but also creates manifold difficulties for well - heeled countries. This eassy depicts the consequences due to this phenomenon and suggest valuable measures to alleviate this problem.
Population crisis brings up myriad of problems with them. To begin with, globe is already facing resource scarcity such as food, fresh water and minerals. This huge population growth fuels this situation. For instance, many underdeveloped African and Asian countries have sabstantial population but they lack with basic amenities such as food and water. This incredible population growth leads them to dependent upon other developed countries which ultimately create blunder in nation's economy.
Secondly, employment issue becomes intricate for government in order to fulfill growth demand. Many poor people have no fortune of a one - time meal a day due to unemployment. Thirdly, environment also suffers and contaminates when to many people live on earth. Ultimately, developed and rich nations spend billions of money to revive surrounding atmosphere which become hindrance in booming economy.
The solution are not straightforward but scrupulous steps should be taken on a war - footing by government. They can bring stringent laws on family child policy, so that overall fertility rate can be decreased. Also, government should patronize their citizens and proffer incentives to them who obey the child policy. To illustrate, recently, indian government introduce new laws on family planning policy, in which they promote their employees who do not have more than 2 children and also provide incentives and bonuses.
To recapitulate, this catastrophic population crisis have detrimental effects on developing as well as developed nations but cautious steps should be taken rapidly by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7793594306 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98679564493 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640569395018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4683705833 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0343962858475 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0112709506596 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172554696317 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0159868762357 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014853449173 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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