Globally environmental problems are escalating which is alarm signal for both contemporary generation and future generation. It is argued by some that prominent way to alleviate this problems is the sample living standard by current humanity for the best future of next generation. Which is not appropriate according to current circumstances due to involments of the other essential parameters.this essay dwell into this with relevant reasons and suitable illustration will further strengthen the notion in the upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, there are many other best ways to mitigate the environmental problems regarding to obvious reasons. Firstly, rather than to force current generation to live in simpler way change in some government policy, regarding to environment and climate condition, will bring fruitful results in favor of ecological perspective. for instance, recently in India authority have changed the policy for rivers to preserve it for future generation by the help of Isha foundation. secondely, People of any country can use environment friendly products without compromise their living standard and also enjoy luxurious life. To exemplify, survey made by oxford university that majority population, nowdays, use electric luxurious cars which has zero emission and curtail the environment issues. Finally, in contemporary era humanity can reduce the excessive trash , which inevitabely cause ecological problems, by less consumption of different products eventually it is better for health and for the sake of the furure generation.so these are the some of the best ways which can diminish the growing concern without accept a simple way of living.
It is often argued by some that simpler way is best with their own relevant reasons like instead of using high tech luxurious car or a conventional car masses have to use bicycle, to lessen the environmental menec, which leads to simpler life like old generation and it will be very beneficial for future generation. They argue that simple living can also leads to better living world for future humanity to simplify, our today’s simple action toward environment will determine the future environment.
To conclude, after having discuss best way to curb the environment issue pertaining to future generation I am on the firm belief that although simple way of life can make difference to solve this issue, there are innumerable best ways to deal with this growing concern of environment.
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 78
- The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 73
- In some countries it has been observed that many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending them to school Do the advantages of children studying at home outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The diagram below shows the environment issues raised by a product over its life cycle Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45430809399 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95707568448 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530026109661 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2607965677 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.083333333 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9166666667 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337385040015 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130302711664 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800702094754 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219056637975 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318029897185 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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