In some countries governments pay the money for students' university fees，while in other countries, students pay for themselves. Do advantages of governments paying for the students outweigh its disadvantages?
There is much controversy over whether students’ university fees should be paid by government or students themselves. Although there are some drawbacks of governments paying for the students, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
There are two drawbacks of government paying for higher education. First of all, budget allocated to education is quite limited. If governments afford tuition fees for all citizens, many universities will be unfunded. Without ample and sufficient funding, universities can hardly update experimental equipments and recruit excellent professors to deliver knowledge. As a result, this situation may lead to the decline of educational quality. Additionally, compared with affording the cost by themselves, students who are free from the duty may not cherish the study opportunities, which lead to the waste of educational resources.
In spite of two drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that that governments pay for undergraduate and postgraduate education is a good measure. Firstly, governments have the obligation to plan for the long-term development. To invest in education is crucial for a better future of the nation. The prosperity of a country requires the contribution of numerous talented and competent citizens, which cannot be realized without high quality tertiary education. Secondly, to receive education is their basic right that should not be deprived of for economic reasons. As gap between rich and poor is widening in many countries, many diligent young people would be denied admission to universities due to their poor family conditions. This will cause serious inequality.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it will be better, on balance, for governments to cover the total expense of university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59040590406 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1769310493 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0434010622 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345717860126 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109449016292 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966063986221 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231438390462 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968667377345 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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