Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strick laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Alcohol industry has been one of the most increasingly controversial topics in recent years. Some countries believe that consuming alcoholic drinks should be restricted by law in some group ages in order to tackle with some health problems and to meet less juvenile crime. Other states feel that alcohol restriction can increase crime rate in youngsters and addiction to other harmful drugs.
People in some countries argue that alcohol consumption have been causing a number of problems in health. Many deseases are aroused because of drinking at the young age. For instance, alcohol can affect to important parts of body like heart, lungs and liver. As a result, there will be more patients who are suffering from heart attack, cancer and insult which have been increasingly serious illnesses that lead to death. Furthermore, people who are drunk are more likely to offend crime. In recent years youngsters who have been consuming alcohol are driving car and because of that there is an increase in the rate of accidents that are caused by drinking. This also puts pedestrians and kids' life in danger.
On the other hand, vodka restriction is causing disorders in some countries. There have been addiction to other harmful psychotropic drugs such as cocaine and nicotine which are more expensive than alcohol. According to scientists, addiction to the drugs that are mentioned above causes more serious problems in health and crime rate of one country. Youth who have consumed nicotine once want it again and again. As they cannot afford it themselves they begin stealing money. So people in some other countries reckon that alcohol restriction is not of a better policy.
All in all, confining consumption of alcohol leads to more serious problems in countries. So I feel that it is not reasonable to have strict laws in terms of consuming vodka drinks.
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... nicotine once want it again and again. As they cannot afford it themselves they b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60776942252 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4598957389 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234274886267 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748115673003 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707665925398 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142607595636 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444784332766 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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