Some people think that young ones should spend more of their free time at home with their families and less time entertaining themselves outside, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by many that children should allocate much of their leisure time to their parents, while others believe that they should enjoy themselves outside as it is more significant. In my opinion, spending quality time with parents is more important than being outside. This essay will delineate both sides of the view with valid arguments and examples.
People who believe that youngsters should spend more time at home have their justifications. This is because parents can inculcate moral values and ethics to their young ones. Moreover, it helps in creating strong bonding between families. In contrast, if they do not spend quality time with their loved ones, their bonding will not be strong enough. Studies have shown that children who spend more time with their parents have better manners than their counterparts. Thus, spending leisure time with families is of utmost importance.
On the other hand, some people think that going outside is equally vital. Youngsters can indulge themselves in some physical activity and live a healthier life. In addition to that, it helps them to interact with the outer world and make new friends. However, people who do not interact much outside of their families while growing up will fail miserably in making real connections at their workplace.
To conclude, although spending time outside helps them to interact with people and make new connections, the values that parents can teach in a family setting are invaluable. I believe that young ones should not only devote their free time to their family, but also manage to take some time from their busy schedule for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16479400749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44908311575 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6693102545 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483717534043 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159785459486 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950795369841 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301492110794 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672422166366 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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