Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others think it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views.
It is argued that sports have a role to play in modern life; meanwhile, others think that it is just a recreational activity. This report will attempt to have a closer look at this issue.
On the one hand, people believe that playing sports is one of the numerous activities in free time to remain healthy. People can keep fit their bodies and prevent them from dangerous diseases, like heart attack by normal sports activities, even without the professional trainer. Moreover, playing physical activity brings people a chance to reduce stress and build their relationship. In fact, team sports can draw people together with a common goal, like improving sports skills or achieving a prize when competing.
On the other hand, this kind of activity plays a role in society. Firstly, people staying in health lead to a saving of the national budget on health insurance. Secondly, the development of some organizations working associated with sports brings more professional sports tournaments for relaxing and also improves the lives of people who work in the sports industry. Lastly, some teams who have professional play and become famous can influence their fan’s behavior. Thus, they are forced to be good roles in society for not putting bad impacts on people.
In conclusion, although there are many opposite opinions about this issue, I believe that sports are not only a physical activity but also an important role nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65227594297 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8475315452 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250033086882 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909569521261 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670578007456 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149189440706 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346560323458 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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