In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
The problem of increasing heath hazards due to the consumption of junk food is a highly controversial issue. some folks hold the opinion that authorities should levy heafty taxes on the sales of unhygienic meals while others reject this notion. In my perspective, the former proposition appears to be more rational. In this article, I will discuss the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
there are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that like cigarettes and alcohol, government can put heavy taxes on the yellow edibles like burger, fries and pastas. Such a step wil discourage people to buy them anymore. Another pivotal aspect in this regard is that funds which which " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are collected by imposing fine on the sales of junk foods foods " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">can be utilized for providing health facilities and health care to the citizens. For instance, parks, gym, and sports centre can be erected to promote healthy lifestyle. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial stems from the fact that it is a basic principle of economics as per which if the price of a commodity goes up then the demand plummets. Similarly, increasing the cost of fast food by putting putting " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">additional charges on consumables will definitely discourage masses to have them on regular basis. this kind of foods foods " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">will become occasional meal for the people. Besides, companies that compromise the health of people people " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">must be punished by making them pay hight taxes. Even, the accumulated amount of money can be spent on awareness campaigns. Hence, it is is " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments arguments " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">aforementioned above, I can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of imposing extra charges on unhealthy diets are too great to ignore.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68652849741 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.99798685548 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.035388008 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1875 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128379468919 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505031978603 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394827190102 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919600110329 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393946927244 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.