In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that governments should impose higher taxes on fast foods, as in some countries an increasing number of health problems are appearing as a result of eating too much of this kind of food. This essay will discuss the reasons behind my strong agreement with this statement.
As a matter of fact, fast food is highly processed, very low in micronutrients and very high in bad macronutrients such as fats and sugars. This, and all the other chemicals that it contains makes it appealing and tasty, and as a result, people are becoming more abusive. Fast food chains such as Mc Donald's and Burger King sell all kinds of bad food for a very low price, making it easy for families with children to afford a meal for everybody. But kids should not grow up thinking that inexpensive means good food.
In fact, if a higher tax was imposed on junk food, this will make it less cheap, leaving people with a wider choice in regard to nutriment. For example, today a nourishing salad costs up to 10 dollars, while a fries and burger menu is less than 5. So why would anybody choose between something that is less tasteful and less cheap and something that is inexpensive and succulent? One choice is left to prevent the spread of dangerous health diseases caused by improper nutrition, and it is to tax more fast foods to push people to make better choices for their health.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the choice of governments to step in and take action by making this kind of junk food more expensive. People need their administrators to help them be safe and healthy when they can't do it on their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an increasing number of health problems are appearing as a result of eating too much of this ...
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Suggestion:
...o make better choices for their health. In conclusion, I totally agree with the ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...help them be safe and healthy when they cant do it on their own.
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...lthy when they cant do it on their own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57931034483 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52417561683 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.069745935 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34187333497 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118571985569 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128127661324 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212062562316 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106636059146 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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