Some countries, it is now possible for people to buy a wide variety of foods transported from all over the world. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?
There is a growing tendency on food industry sector that some of group societies are recent days probably to purchase wide range of diet made from foreign countries. This condition leads to beneficial effects for some people who buy this commodities. This essay will investigate that this issue has both positive and negative sides and put forward an amount of relevant instances.
On the one hand, one of the consequences which might be able to occur to the nation buying these items. A few group of societies could taste various food internationally where it originates from every countries in the world easily, these mean fellow could find whatever sort of meals they want to eat in theirs nations, subsequently, pizza which originates from Italy as an example, now is being available in almost all parts of Indonesia, without going directly to this region of origin. Thus, Indonesia is able to consume such from different nations. The exporters of the foreign food are highly likely to make more profit by exporting their traditional meals to faraway places. In addition, wheat for instance from Arabic which is sold to global world derived from Saudi Arabia would benefit financially for its state.
On the other hand, the effect might be able to happen to transport products outer from domestic nations is that the exporters and importers should pay tax when they send the resources. This regulation has been implemented to all over states over the earth. Consequently, these cost of items are getting higher and higher over decades.
To sum up, in this modern world, some countries could transport commodities outer of origin states without complex procedure due to implementing international trade, because of this, food distribution which made from all over the world bring an amount of benefits effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun group seems to be countable; consider using: 'few groups'.
Suggestion: few groups
...cur to the nation buying these items. A few group of societies could taste various food i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, sort of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13804713805 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64649463233 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.2750042309 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302074804526 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101591680736 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707290719045 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182689792843 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044990759182 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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