In some countries lifestyle of people changing rapidly and this affect family relationship. the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage.
It is true that changing lifestyle is common in many countries and this would impact relationships. The industrial revolution and overseas influence make many countries change their normal life to modern. Escalating changes often create problems in people's lives and it may lead to broken families, child abuse, and even poverty.
There are many advantages if people change their normal life to an advanced level. Firstly, people can experience the modern world and such changes would precipitate their standard of living. Lifestyle modification also helps them to interact with others and that would elaborate their views, cultures, and way of thought. advanced changes would enhance education, employment, technical developments, and so on. furthermore, lifestyle changes explore the world and anything could reach at a fingertip in terms of escalating changes in technology and the internet.
However, excessive changes in lifestyle often create many controversies in day-to-day life, and in a relationship. Every member of the family is busy with their lives and they could not get time to communicate with each other. Owing to the fact that, people are more concentrated on their jobs, commitments, and even on health problems. modern life and the workplace insist the person stay away from home and achieve the target in a fixed time period. In addition, such changes may lead to the financial crisis, a lack of care and support for the children and the partner. These issues are apparently affecting the bonding or the foundation of the family such as divorce, single parent issues
To sum up, changing lifestyle would be inevitable in this new era and managing family relations would also be sufficient for everyone. Otherwise, these changes would be devastating and the disadvantage overcome the benefits to the core.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Advanced
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: Modern
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81737829882 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0447527427 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266527479703 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846067067869 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626592583948 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159259396318 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333768205805 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.