Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. discuss both views and give your opinion
Education is the corner stone of individual future and community development. Many people often argued that, formal education start as much as early, While some oppose that which should be start after the preschool time. However, in this essay explain about the education starting criteria and state my opinion of early formal education benefits than late study.
On the one hand, many debated that, children are too low to start education during their enjoyable days with family and siblings. After the age of seven year pupil may have confidence to go school and ability to learn numerous syllabus. During this period children let to do things alone and interact with others friendly, unlikely to behave like strangers inside the school faculty and co students. Owing to the fact that, people ensure the advantage of being home physically and psychologically by the support of elders grand parents or care givers. So as to pupils have the energy to deal with dilemma of life and inter personal relationship. For example, in Algerian village preschoolers are stayed in home until seven or more years and study the basic culture and tradition of society than formal education. Survey reports that, students from there have the capability to overcome stress and scrutinizing view of life.
On the other hand, opposers believe that, make use of education early age would cherish the children attitude towards life. In other words, pupils ascertain the ability to grasp things early and motivate memory power in some extent. Such students get chance to interact with other classmates or seniors may have the proclivity to learn innovative things and enhance idea and skill eventually. For instance, kindergarten students from china performed ball dance in international stadium exhibits the power and memory of students who went early in school. Moreover, early schooling and education develop the communication skill even bilingual in early period rather than late going students in BBC reports.
To sum up, in my perspective, students who went early in school has more prone to get ideas and develop inborn talent than late going students without consider family co-stay up to seven years. So as to students started education early before get too close in home and sometimes before become lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'started'?
Suggestion: started
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pupil' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pupils'.
Suggestion: pupils
...d siblings. After the age of seven year pupil may have confidence to go school and ab...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...of elders grand parents or care givers. So as to pupils have the energy to deal with dil...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...sider family co-stay up to seven years. So as to students started education early before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53259711358 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568733153639 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9598347042 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.647058824 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242888549733 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074450014788 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06576052893 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150661981798 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821998623789 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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