in some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
In recent years, there has been an increasing number of people who live alone in some developed countries, especially, some big cities and towns. The rise in the number of one – person households may have both positive and negative consequences equally.
On the one hand, one – person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On individual level, those who choose to live alone may become more independent and self – reliant. For instance, young adults who live alone can learn to cook, clean, and pay their bills or even manage their own budget. These are valuable life skills which a person who live with their parents may not have. Therefore, an increase in such individuals can be a negative development. Form the economic perspective, if the number of people living alone increases, there will be a greater demand for housing. This will benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products and services.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the feelings of independence, people may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry because they miss out emotional supports from daily conversation with their family or flatmates, they hear the weight of all bills and responsibilities. In this case, the trend towards living alone seems negative. Secondly, from financial point of view, a rise in the demand for housing will push up property prices and rents. While this benefits some businesses, people who choose to live alone will be faced with rising living costs.
In conclusion, I believe that living alone have both beneficial and detrimental effects on both individual and economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19520547945 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73659710028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9470226336 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236883523431 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834612699008 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687960445383 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146339324121 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486392117609 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.