In some countries, many people do not have enough money to access the Internet. Some people believe that governments should be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get free access to the Internet. Others, however, argue that we should pay for Internet access. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, we are living in a state-of-the-art society, and going along with that is an unparalleled pervasiveness of the Internet. As a consequence, there are countless persistently debatable issues that governments ought to be in charge of making sure that everyone has unrestricted access to the Internet. Whilst, I wholeheartedly advocate this assertion though both sides are backed by their priority.
To commence with, in a fast-paced modern changing context, with the hustle and bustle lifestyle, many individuals are skeptical about the importance of having Internet connectivity. It is often assumed that one may live comfortably without access to the Internet. As a result, it should not be the government's obligation to ensure that everyone has access to the Internet. Furthermore, achieving the end aim is logistically impossible due to the massive quantity of money required.
On the flip side, it is regarded as a double-edged sword, the Internet's value should not be underestimated by any age group. In terms of education, the Internet helps students to expand their knowledge and become more aware of global concerns. Furthermore, becoming acquainted with the Internet assists the elder age in closing the invisible generation gap that exists between various generations. To keep costs to a minimum, governments can simply install basic Internet-surfing equipment in national libraries or schools and make it available to the public.
To recapitulate, in the hectic globalized civilization, this Internet tendency should be notably amplified for a plethora of properly urgent actions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...rnet. As a result, it should not be the governments obligation to ensure that everyone has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61475409836 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37553682513 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5732272131 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325727744835 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116582306132 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935628680696 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187203015236 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430067332955 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...rnet. As a result, it should not be the governments obligation to ensure that everyone has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61475409836 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37553682513 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5732272131 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325727744835 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116582306132 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935628680696 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187203015236 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430067332955 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.