In some countries more and more are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this

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In some countries, more and more are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Over the last few decades, peoples' notion has changed due to advancement in technology. Today mostly individuals' are curious to get familiar with the past of their houses. So, they can live comfortably. This essay intends to analyse the causes and ways how multitudes' can get this information.
To commence with, although in this technological era, every person has a big believe in science, nevertheless majority of population are always likely to know about the history of apartments they accomodate in. Because, no person like to stay on that building which is connected with some tragedy. Moreover, every person has a right to well aware about the place before accomodation. So , they can shift without any hesitation.
On the other hand, with the progression in technology. Nowadays, it is not difficult to get information from various search engines. Furthermore, there are many big corporations which facilitates facility of an individual who provides all information about the history of houses. In addition, people can also get familiar from a past owners or a dealer from whom they buy house.
In conclusion, every person want to stay safe, no person like to get in trouble. Thus, many people has keen interest to find out about the past experience of the place they live.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...story of apartments they accomodate in. Because, no person like to stay on that buildin...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... about the place before accomodation. So , they can shift without any hesitation. ...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'owner'?
Suggestion: owner
...eople can also get familiar from a past owners or a dealer from whom they buy house. ...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any people has keen interest to find out about the past experience of the place t...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...as keen interest to find out about the past experience of the place they live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09004739336 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86956879379 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3703906048 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7142857143 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22473221355 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737117252811 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728013105078 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134635884653 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388646164392 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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