it's good that living with parents is one transparent advantage of familial sentiment.
This can be explained by the fact that you can take care of your family every time or you can observe your parents's health condition
this leads to the problem that you may lose your privacy or your time or worse that it can make you lose independence.
Therefore, living with parents even if you are an adult has some advantages that pale in comparison with disadvantages
Notwithstanding the aforementioned upside, living with parents can be seen in a negative light. Perceptibly, losing your privacy
is one of the major consequences. The reason is if you live independently, you can do everything you want without hesitation like you can invite your friends to come over to have a white night or you can throw a party at your place... but if you live with parents
you can't do it if you don't have their permission or you have to notice their emotional to make your next decision,
which is turned to one problem that you can't do everything on your own. Hence, it makes you become frailer day by day
Further and more prominently economic constraint is attributed to living with parents. To be more accurate, when you living with your parents
you can't control your economic condition, for exampe, you have to pay for a lot of fee like electronic, water, bill...
As a result, living with parents is not a good idea for those who have graduated or have a stable job,
because you can't improve yourself or be restrained your opportunity to success.
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- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
its good that living with parents is one tr...
^^^
Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... light. Perceptibly, losing your privacy is one of the major consequences. The re...
^^^
Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur place... but if you live with parents you cant do it if you dont have their pe...
^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e... but if you live with parents you cant do it if you dont have their permission...
^^^^
Line 8, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve with parents you cant do it if you dont have their permission or you have to no...
^^^^
Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...which is turned to one problem that you cant do everything on your own. Hence, it ma...
^^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... when you living with your parents you cant control your economic condition, for ex...
^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ted or have a stable job, because you cant improve yourself or be restrained your ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76579925651 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75846952174 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0168421243 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.444444444 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178133235519 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103553439907 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822884700835 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982111592999 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930419161088 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.