In the contemporary society, there is a considerable increase in the number of grown-up people carrying on living with their parents after they have graduated from university and had a stable job. This essay seeks to discuss both the merits and demerits of it and give my own opinion.
There exists a notion that this would create a more united family between members. As they regularly communicate with each other and their parents are becoming older and older, they will form a close-knitted relationship and take care of their parents with a view to expressing their gratitude for having nurturing them. For instance, many families have the custom of spending a Sunday out for picnic in somewhere else in which they can sit together, enjoy the happiness and confide their stress at work. As a result, they will gain experience from each other's stories as well as form themselves as a family-loving one so that they can be a breadwinner of their own family, who other members can count on you when they meet difficulties.
Though it is essential that they learn a lot from their parents, real experience they gain will be more advantageous. As their mum and dad feel sympathetic for their fatigue at work, the grown-up will heavily rely on their assistance from their parents in doing the household chores and financial support to satisfy their personal needs such as shopping without wasting their little salary earned from their occupation. There are a large number of parents in Asia have a propensity to be far too protective towards their children even when they have fully been grown up regardless of his illegal activities. As a consequence, they will lack soft skills which are of paramount importance for their lives.
In conclusion, despite the benefits they have from their families such as relationships and personal quality, which I mentioned above, I personally think that living independently will make them more mature and gain survival skills. Needless to say, they still have their day-off and holidays to spend time with their families, therefore, the advantages are outweighed by the real experience and independence if they do not live with their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...earned from their occupation. There are a large number of parents in Asia have a propensity to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04419889503 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75117041949 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2573829074 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.166666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298423470952 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120773758656 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078955231889 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202169713213 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367675905613 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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