In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
In many countries around the world, having your own house rather than living on a rent is significantly important for people. This essay will discuss important reasons of owning a home including financial stability and freedom of living. In my opinion, it is a positive situation because it eliminate the problems which come with the landlord.
On one hand, many people believe that financial stability often comes if a person has its own house. It is considered as a symbol of higher status and a secured financial position. However, it also depicts one's freedom of living on their own terms. For example, in Pakistan, people seems to have a well reputed lifestyle and financial freedom because of having their own apartment than those who are tanants. Due to this, it holds vital importance for people to have their houses.
On the other hand, I completely agree with this statement because many people do not want to face any kind of problem that comes with having a rented house. Those who have their own house lives freely and according to their lifestyles. They do not need to follow any rules set by the landlords and pay rent at the start of the month. For instance, many people are caught up in fighting with the landlords because they have to come home before 10 pm or the door will remain closed. Since these issues become unavoidable, people prefer to have their own home.
In conclusion, living in your own property is far important for people than becoming a tanant in some countries. This essay discussed the importance of having a own house by explaining the reasons of financial stability and living freely. Also, in my opinion, it is entirely agreeable that having your own apartment holds significant importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86824324324 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56373958954 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4505464578 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209667747858 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799396959343 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052616041183 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156409916588 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060359105431 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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