People in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important.
Why might this be the case?
Is this a positive or negative development?
For some people, the ownership of a house is extremely crucial, while renting properties is underestimated. This essay will highlight some reasons before reaching the conclusion that the circumstance mentioned is positive.
To begin with, a great deal of people dream of buying a home in order to have their own private space. Particularly, several tenants sometimes have to share a flat with other people, which leads to limitations in personal life. For example, in Vietnam, there is a great number of workers living in collective quarters where they have to share a kitchen or a bathroom. Another reason is that some people are put pressure on by their family to buy their own house. In some countries, the young generation are often taught to have a stable life, which means they should own property before getting married. As a result, many people strive to make enough money to buy their own home.
I personally believe this situation is positive due to the fact that it motivates people in life. In other words, if they set a goal that is having a house, they will be inspired to put effort into study and work. Take Vietnamese workers as an example, they may register for extra courses or work overtime with the aim of improving their skills and acquiring experience to get advancement at workplaces. Therefore, they could earn much more money and have no longer to live in a shared flat. Moreover, this specific goal would help people create a saving habit in their daily life. In more detail, they could learn how to manage finance by reducing money on unused products from online shopping sites such as Shopee, Lazada or creating a savings account. Clearly, trying to buy property could bring a chance for people to acquire several beneficial skills.
To sum up, the main reasons why in some countries, it is more vital to own a house are the attention of people to their privacy and their burden put on by family. However, I am of the view that it is positive since some advantages are offered involving opportunities to gain knowledge, skills and motivation.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally believe this situation is positive due to the fact that it motivates people...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6111551417 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4091208405 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162562621564 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577149902127 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473497900018 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10601661782 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151496031856 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally believe this situation is positive due to the fact that it motivates people...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6111551417 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4091208405 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162562621564 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577149902127 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473497900018 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10601661782 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151496031856 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.