In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might be the case ?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?
The shelter has been indeed a crucial part of human life since ancient times. What provokes controversy is whether an accommodation should be permanently purchased or rented. Although individuals could reap many benefits from living in a temporary house, I am strongly convinced that a permanent house would be a better choice.
To begin with, opting between two types of houses is important because of many reasons. Satisfaction when an individual living in a rented house and an owned one is exceedingly different. For instance, when living in a rented house, if the house’s wall became dirty, any redecorations would not be personally decided due to the lack of house ownership.
On the one hand, it could be argued that people could gain much from renting a house. Advocates of this opinion argue that it is easier for them to regularly relocate owing to working reasons. By choosing this type of accommodation, people can confidently apply to any corporation without the fear of being homeless especially for individuals who have a limited budget. For them, owning a house and renting one in a different place is impossible, while selling their current shelter takes very much time and effort which would postpone or even ruin their plan.
However, I side with those who believe that people should permanently purchase accommodation. First, when owning a house, concern for the safety and privacy of the owner is lower. Having the ownership of the house, people can freely choose the most secure of privacy system which can deter their shelter from being robbed or assaulted. Also, when people rent a house, the owner could easily arrange some cameras to stalk results in the leakage of the renter’s personal information. Furthermore, purchasing accommodation is a wise and common type of investment in recent days. Because of the growing demand for land and the global inflation, the land value is now significantly increasing. For instance, in Ha Noi, the land value has risen at a really fast pace from the center of the city to the remoter one.
In conclusion, although owning a house is unsuitable for some specific cases, in the vast majority of instances, not only does this action bring about more convenience, safety and privacy of personal information, but also helps people to grow more money. Therefore, I believe that permanently purchase a house is a much more sensible approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06801007557 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80709430534 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55919395466 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7151847458 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.894736842 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190540750172 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569562886785 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382111136795 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105358005566 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517487180445 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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