In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries nowadays, it is common for people to have their own houses rather than rent apartments or any accomodations. This trend can be explained by a number of reasons. And in my opinion, this trend have both positive and negative effects.
To begin with, for many people, owning a house makes them feel secure and stable, this is a natural instinct of human. By owning a home, people don't have to worry about the rental fee or being kicked out like people renting accomodations. Even in Vietnam and many Asian countries, it is traditional to own a house as it is a shelter for family and a property that inherited by generations. Another reason to elucidate this phenomenon is because of the expensive house rental fee thesedays. Considering for a permanent time, renting accomodations costs a greater amount of money than buying houses, as the rental fee depends a lot on landlords as well as the economy's state. For the last reason, owning a home allows people to live freely. They can modify their shelters by decorating them, building a new floor and so on, without any forbiddance.
In my perspective, wether this trend is positive and negative relies on lots of factors. On the one hand, it may enhance the economy, since people will be motivated to earn more money in order to buy houses. On the other hand, this trend may also widen the rich-poor gap or push numerous people fall into a dilemma situation. A number of real estate agents will take advantages of this phenomenon by increasing houses' prices, which reduces chances to own a house of many people.
To sum up, I believe this trend can bring either advantages or disadvantages as it is subjected to several certain factors. As long as a person can afford the house's price, he or she can purchase one.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71474358974 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69500589764 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8590252924 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269938684966 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895266014311 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658846140562 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162879811873 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08982575436 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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