In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
in many countries, possessing a home is a goal for young people around the age of 30, not opting for renting. I personally believe that this is a positive way of thinking, and there are some motivations for this aspirations.
One of the most crucial reasons why people want to have a home is that they do not want to be dependent on landlords or potential roommates. Landlords can throw people out or break into tenants' space at their convenience. Owning a house means that you take control of everything, from what your house looks like to decoration… Furthermore, you can keep track on how much utilities your house uses monthly. Clearly that your money will be safe from having increased. Moreover, possessing a home makes you considered a responsible, successful grown-up. This is also more easy for you to settle down and have a marriage.
In my view, this is a good development for adults. Switching from a rented home to an owned house benefits your finance. Renting a home is a waste of money, and if you continue renting a home, you will miss the chance of living in your own house. Owned house is also an investment because many houses can gain value by the time the
owners live there. For instance, in Ha Noi, the land in Hoan Kiem has become one of the most expensive immovables, from the 1990s to now, it has doubled the price compared to what they used to be. Owning a house also increases privacy.
To sum up, owning a house is a up-and-coming, worth investment. It also elevates you social status and increases your privacy. It is really a great development for young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, for instance, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63028169014 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7089046773 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6089484891 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3529411765 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280242561794 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887394753666 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618730396885 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153624373076 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699067400182 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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