In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In this fast-changing world, people have higher living standard with also superior average income, then more people have a need to own their home and for many individuals that is a life target. This essay will discuss the reasons of its importance and also some traits of this issue.
There are some obvious causes why owning a home is prominent for some people. Firstly, having the own home can express and confirm their finance and independence. Owning a home here means that a person can pay for a whole house price and its other expense. Therefore, a house can be seem as one of the proudest achievement in many people’s career. It will also give the owners more confidence and incentives to gain their purposed targets. Secondly, owning a house can open more potential successes. A house is a valuable asset, and it can become a profitable investment if the owners use it for renting or other economic purposes.
On the other hand, the question about owning a home is negative or not still remains controversy, and I am of the mixed opinions. Initially, the most conscious effect which can convince this is a positive situation is that it can help boost up the national and global consumerism, especially in real estate market. When the demand of owning a property is increased, many other professions will also be fostered to enhance their goods. In this way, the domestic economy and industries can attract more abroad investors and businesses to their potential market and purchasing. However, there is still exist some obtrusive pitfalls making a negative phenomanon. Since a home’s owner have to pay not only the initial price of the house but also many other running cost like management fee, and it can curtail on their saving money to other work. Moreover, it can be too forced for people who want to move their accommodation frequently or too busy with their jobs.
In conclusion, I think that is difficult to say owning a house is important or not since it depend on each people needs and wants, but I still agree that it can play a role of a very effective motivation for the young.
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 73
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79178082192 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64616974118 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4611891968 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259473951396 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878008259277 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562614058386 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168992782222 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315497742149 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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