In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation
According to the prompt, in few countries it is very important to have your own house, rather than renting one. In my opinion, this is mostly a negative situation for mainly two reasons. However it can also be viewed as a positive situation due to one reason which is discussed below.
Firstly, it is a negative situation as buying a new home costs an fortune in such countries, where importance is given to owning a home instead of renting. For example, lets consider a person whose salary is below average. He thinks of buying his own house, as it is considered "important", he would take some loan which may have heavy interest. By the help of the loan, he will definitely be able to buy his own house, but he might spend his most the of adult life in repaying the loan due to the heavy inetrest. Also, he might not be able to enjoy his life or fulfill his any dreams due to the debts. According to research and survery, 40% of suicides in my country are due to the tension taken to repay the home loan. It might not be possible for everyone to buy their own house. One can enjoy, be happy and fulfill their dream even by staying in an rented house, without worrying about any loan.
Secondly, in such nations where house ownership is considered important, the prices of house rise exponentially due to heavy investors and bank policies. It then becomes impossible for middle class and lower class citizen to buy their own house. For example, many people visit new countries for their job or education. Lets say, a person is been transfered to some new country for his job. Finding and buying a new apartment in countries where prices are inflated just by some investors and real estate agent. It will be very difficult for him to buy his own house. Thus, pumping the demand and prices of house just for profits to some investors and banks can be really difficult situation for people who are actually in need. In most countries, this is the situation, where the prices are just pumped without any actual reason, and the consequences are faced by other middle class and needy people.
However, it is a dream for many people to have their own home. Also, in some countries it is considered as good investment to buy a new home, to earn good returns in future. So it can be considered as a positive situation for people having ambition and dreams of buying their own apartment and also for them who have enough funds and looking for some investment with good returns.
In conclusion, buying your own home, rather than renting one is a negative situation mainly due to two reasons, outlined above. Nevertheless, it can also be considered a positive situation for few citizen, who are dreaming of having their own house since childhood, and for some people who has ample of funds to invest and can get good returns in few years.
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 507.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62130177515 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5615371782 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41617357002 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.345003776 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355135171139 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114184725047 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653241357935 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238016558931 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071147839576 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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