Some individuals argue that owning a house is crucial compared to renting one. There are several reasons supporting this viewpoint, but personally, I believe that it would have both drawbacks and benefits.
There are several reasons why people argue that owning a house is very important in some countries. Firstly, purchasing a house is often considered a symbol of maturity in some nations. For instance, in Vietnam, the ability to afford a house is seen as a demonstration of one's capability to support a family, particularly for men. Secondly, homeownership is crucial because owners have the right to make decisions about their property, a privilege not enjoyed by renters. In other words, ownership is vital, making owning a home a top priority. Finally, in certain parts of the world, there is a preference for strong family bonds. For instance, a house is not merely a place for a family to live; it can serve as a home for future generations, playing a role in preserving and passing down traditional cultures.
In my opinion, there are both positive and negative impacts of this situation. From an environmental perspective, the increased construction of houses contributes to a higher carbon footprint. The construction industry is among the most significant contributors to carbon emissions, implying that a rise in homeownership can result in adverse consequences. Furthermore, if people continue to build more homes, the real estate sector will develop, contributing to economic growth. Additionally, personal houses often hold historical and cultural values, providing further benefits.
In conclusion, I believe that people aspire to own their houses for various reasons, and this situation can have both beneficial and detrimental impacts on the environment and society.
- Write about the following topic Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 67
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 73
- The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007 2011 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d a house is seen as a demonstration of ones capability to support a family, particu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39642857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15075104425 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.151532932 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229254347312 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728745139773 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689645908188 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135589477758 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408924301022 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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