In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having a house instead of renting one is vital for citizens in several nations. There are several reasons for this trend. In my opinion, this could be a mistake because it may have a principal negative impact.
People tend to own houses and not to rent ones because of advantages for both the present and the future. Firstly, it is easy for citizens having their own home to make a change in these houses as the way they want. the owners could alter everything freely without others’ allowance permission. Meanwhile, it is inconvenient for them if they rent houses. They need permission from the owner to decide on decorations like colors and arrangements. Secondly, houses could be regarded as a future preparation for the owners’ offspring. For instance, Vietnamese adults have a traditional belief in passing their fortune on to their younger generations. They attempt to work hard in their whole life to afford detached houses so that their children could inherit the houses as a fortune that the early generation would leave to them.
From my point of view, this is a negative situation due to a main deleterious problem. Owning a house by purchasing or building it can affect the owner's financial conditions. For instance, Vietnamese families might face a range of issues from suffering from debts for a long time to going bankrupt.
In conclusion, that almost all people prefer owning houses to renting ones is attributed to present and future benefits. However, I believe the preference for having a house is negative owing to the owner's financial burden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01908396947 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73987586579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7368011688 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206739162558 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781424626039 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540297970614 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142705531704 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362195774563 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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