Some countries reduce inner-city traffic by increasing public transport. Others impose a tax on people who drive in the city
Few countries are taking measures to reduce traffic congestion by imposing a tax on people who drive in the city and encouraging people to use public transport instead. This essay will firstly discuss, how usage of more public transport will benefit the country as the biggest advantage. Secondly, how forcing people to pay a high tax for driving the car as a disadvantage.
Due to the increase in population, people are facing many adverse effects on the environment. One such thing is air pollution. When people use their own vehicle for commute, they are explicitly contributing to traffic, which in turn causes more air pollution. Instead, if people use public transport, traffic congestion can be controlled and making the environment more reliable place to live.
On the other hand, imposing the tax may benefit the government but not for the people. Places where public transport is not of high frequency, people are forced to use their own vehicle and for the local commute, people cannot rely on public transport all the time. People with low monthly wages will suffer a lot, due to the increase in the tax, as this will be an additional cost to them.
In conclusion, using more public transport is a really good plan to reduce traffic but the government should address those issues before imposing the tax, so people from different classes will get benefited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64596922112 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0069451524 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395648009947 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14561386273 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130296081345 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241859211535 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10483567612 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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