In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out – of – town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out – of – town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantage?
As a result of urbanization, cities are now surrounded by suburbs, and these areas often feature a large mall or shopping center. The concentration of products in one location make these retail outlets attractive destinations for consumers, who almost with no exception drives to the. Despite the merits of these all-in-one locations, there are some notable demerits that should be considered.
Beginning with the positive aspects, it is striking that a gigantic mall offers various options for buyers. Moreover, the large chain stores that populate these shopping center generally proposes cheaper prices due to economies of scale. A further convenience is that a considerable amount of the population relocates in suburban zones, so these shopping centers are actually closer to people than the traditional stores situated in the central business district.
Nevertheless, there are some undesirable effects of this situation. For one, large stores and malls are operated by monolithic corporations who run small shop owners out of business, while not returning much to the local community. In fact, Walmart, one of the largest mega stores in the US receives a massive amount of government welfare, while locally-owned businesses are forced into bankruptcy and even Walmart employees are paid minimum wage and often rely on government handouts. Not to mention, the almost ubiquitous practice of driving to malls and large chain stores puts a strain on local transport infrastructure, increasing traffic congestion and contributing to air pollution.
In light of these facts, one can conclude that while having everything available in one location is undeniably opportune, the harm to local business is similarly prominent. As the saying goes: “You cannot have your cake and eat it too”, and in this instance, it seems that the benefits of large stores is outweighed by the economic and social harm they cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... who almost with no exception drives to the. Despite the merits of these all-in-one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, while, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45484949833 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95369801141 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8617285567 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130335459736 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463865468314 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351438234367 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725306161771 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179218539812 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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