In some countries students pay their college or university fees while in some others the government pay for them Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages

Education plays key role in every scholar life so that in some continents students pay out their fees by their own while in some other government take the responsibility of it. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, government doing great job by helping the scholar through paying their tuition fees and their are many factors which proven right this decisions such as it cut down the pressure of submitting the fees a good illustration of this is as we can see the students who migrate abroad for higher education they do part time for their bread and butter as well as they earn their fees also by doing part time job due to which they are not able to concentrate their studies. Moreover, in present time not all student get opportunity to study because their parents are not financially stable to pay fees in this case if government come forward to asses then it will encourage more to study and the nation future will be bright so somehow it quite beneficial to government along their will only single load on students and it is studies the workload for fees get back on and in future those scholar will up lift the GDP of nation by their talent.
On the other hand, indeed it influence the scholar to achieve their goal but it taking nation in direction of financial crises because authority have not enough fund to provide free education to every single student because the estimate value is so high. for instance due to raise in unemployment government is going through lack of money along they have many other crucial stuffs to manage which makes nation keep moving.
In conclusion, my take in this I reckon pros overcome on cons because the youth are the base of any nation irrigate them by providing free of cost education then they contribute with their studies in future and the country will grow up.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63582089552 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37090104247 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.524557125 49.4020404114 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.857142857 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8571428571 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288247576584 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129801989498 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108778685998 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164998756666 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928288381578 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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