In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days.
Why is this?
Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?
Music is an inspiring criteria among different types and generations of people particularly young individuals. The taste of music and vocals has encountered huge diversities by the ones who are major fan of it as well as the artists who play an instrument professionally during recent years. Many believe that the an honorable notice to classical music neither by fans nor by players can not be seen by young generation and hence, the believe there should be some unavoidably rules maintained in order to encourage young adults listen to classical types frequently as well as tend to play the related instruments skillfully. Here in this essay I am going to put into words why the attraction and tendency to classical oldies and vintage style music has faded out in young aged individuals, also whether there ought to be severe demands to encourage them get back to this style in current years or not.
Primarily, if we get deeply into music with all its included aspects as a trend, there we face huge fluctuations and inspiring periods trough out the time. The number of people who are known as unexperienced vocalists as well as instrument players has drastically increased in recent years. Mean while a considerable type of instruments has been appeared newly, and had been worked out successfully in attracting their own group of fans. The music industry now days is not dedicated to a limited number of known talented artists as opposed to past days , who were appreciated by most of the people world wide.
Secondly, since the seventies decade and wide spreading industrial revolution globally, every day different people joined this industry, like its now a platform belong to every one. How ever old generation still believe that the art and masterpieces in decades ago are more valuable than current productions, and elimination and ignorance to classical music by young generation is not accepted. As a mater of fact in todays world no one can emphasize on a specific type of music and attributed as a best one or more preferable, because we are now facing a totally competency market in this industry and every many bands and individual vocalist as well as instrumental players impact their recently added fans and people in many ways and put a lot of efforts simultaneously to keep them in their own circles and so orienting young men and woman with this variety of musical tasted toward an oldies like classic neither is easy nor is impossible.
To sum it up, lets say that one of the contemporary advantage of music industry is its considerable number of styles and voices, music is still one of the greatest factors for mankind to get inspired in different situation and there for limiting the mindset and tastes of people in listening to this magical art is rarely possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8226846841 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520084566596 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.901540734 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.416666667 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4166666667 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367864109496 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129207827516 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771951176946 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210449038478 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115394907488 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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