In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work-based training instead of attending university.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, education in the real workplace is becoming significant. Many teenagers in some countries seem to be more interested in job-based training than enrolling in university. Personally, I believe that there are numerous benefits for both situations. I will analyse both perspectives in the essay.
To begin with, the advantages of the training course is that young people nowadays tend to achieve more real experience in their career, so they selected to attend work-based training. This means that they will derive essential lessons to extend their knowledge. For example, they would face many problems, which could never be taught in a classroom and they have to solve these problems by themselves. Second, there is no need to spend several years at the university to get a degree. In other words, it leads to getting a fast result, which is also important in today's world competition to get a position.
On the other hand, the interesting thing about the university. Firstly, the university gives people more opportunities to choose a good occupation, so they have a high salary and the possibility of improving their education with a Master's degree in the future. While other students who take courses in work-based learning cannot gain these chances. For instance, in some companies, they might start in a small position because they do not have a bachelor's degree.
In summary, it is undeniable that there are many advantages of work-based training, but I believe the benefits of university education are greater, as they are able to have preparation and obtain an experience from the lessons that they have learned and chosen by their choices, and teenagers be able to earn a good salary from their career.
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- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 73
- It is difficult for teachers to be both popular well liked and effective in helping students learn Agree or disagree 73
- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Playing sports teach people more lessons about life 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on with a Masters degree in the future. While other students who take courses in work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in summary, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12014134276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83129068973 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2846153765 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207268431944 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616031210924 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079316607523 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120298837719 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269273373487 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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