In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
There is currently a contentious argument over many teenagers deciding to enroll in work-based training rather than attending university. However, I believe both points of view has their own benefits. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both situations.
To begin with, the main reason for believing the advantages of training course is outweigh its disadvantages is that young people would gain more experience and skills which are helpful for their career. For instance, they will be faced with actual combat and some unexpected situations, they have to solve by themselves, which is completely inaccessible to the classroom knowledge. It is also possible to say that these youngsters can get the position they wants faster, one good illustration of this is training would give more comprehensive knowledge than college and that’s what companies want.
On the other hand, people often have the opinion that college is a part of growing up , since college is a bridge connecting high school and society, where young people can gradually adapt to society. A second point is that university always full of fun, a particularly good example here is the university gives people more opportunities to choose a occupation, thus they have a high salary and high degree in the future.
In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that taking part in training is more helpful for future careers, as they are able to have preparation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17427385892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85490541692 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3830418961 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243846548439 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788083735882 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626177671014 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122329416618 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428346671772 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.