Nowadays, according to many scientific researches, playing sports have many benefits to help us grow stronger, and more and more people enjoying playing sports. Some people think that playing sports can only make us stronger in physical field on the internet and started a discussion. However, I am against with the opinion and I firmly believe that sports can also make us stronger in mental due to it can teach us lessons about life.
First and foremost, there is no denying that playing sports can make us study and work harder. The reason is that when we do a sport we need training and paying attention on it, it has the same style as we do when we study and work. If people don't training or they pay less attention to these things, they cannot do it well. To illustrate this, I would like to give the example of my cousin. He was a super fan of playing sports and was good at almost every sports, he spent most of his free time on playing basketball and football. But his academic scores were not that good, and both he and my uncle were worried about this. Once my uncle told him to study hard, just spent as much time on studying as he spent in sports. He tried that and paid fully attention on study, and it worked. He finally got into his dream school.
In addition, on no account should we underestimate that playing sports can teach us how to make a good relationship with others. What may explain this is that when we playing sports, there are two kinds of characters for us: teammates and opponents. We should show our patients and tolerance to our teammates, and be respected to our opponents, which is also called sports sprits. For instance, one of my friend Liming, he was the captain of volleyball team in our school and he always trained hard with his teammates. He was kind and patient, whenever his teammates got questions or made mistakes, he would help them to solve the problems. Even some of the problems were stupid, he didn't laugh at them. And he also treated his opponents well, most of our schoolmates enjoying playing with him.
Furthermore, no one would deny that playing sports can make us satisfied to face to lose. This is because most sports are zero sum game, which means someone loses when someone wins. And it is common to meet some people that play better than you, and people may always lose when they join a competition. For example, I like playing table tennis and I always join some competitions. Once, I lost at the first match, I was upset and didn't want to complete anymore. But my parents and coach encouraged me to let me join other competitions. There were wins and losses, and after many experience, losses now just makes me fill with passion in both sports and works.
In conclusion, playing sports definitely can help us grow up not only physically, but also mentally. It teaches how to work harder, ways to make a good relationship with others and give us a satisfaction mental to face the lose.
- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Playing sports teach people more lessons about life 73
- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work based training instead of attending university Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: some
...d help them to solve the problems. Even some of the problems were stupid, he didnt laugh at...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...en some of the problems were stupid, he didnt laugh at them. And he also treated his ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ost at the first match, I was upset and didnt want to complete anymore. But my parent...
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Line 4, column 574, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
.... There were wins and losses, and after many experience, losses now just makes me fill with pas...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d give us a satisfaction mental to face the lose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55639097744 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44728179743 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484962406015 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7205522238 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5714285714 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272127933901 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669207335142 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712779284804 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165499150248 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109607227341 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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