In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that home education in which many parents begin teaching their children themselves at home has become commonplace worldwide. While this method of education tends to bring some advantages, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On one hand, there are some main reasons that lead to a considerable increase in the number of home-educated children. The first objection is that this mean of education provides opportunities for parents to take great care of their youngsters. When students take lessons at their own houses, parents can easily identify their children’s weaknesses and then prevent them from having difficulties in studying as one-to-one lessons allow much faster progress. For instance, homeschooling students can ask their parents or tutors when there are some misunderstandings in the lessons or when they face a tough problem. The second reason is that home-based education is more convenient for families who live in distant areas with poor means of transportation because they are offered lessons directly at home instead of going to school.
On the other hand, I believe that home education might bring more negative effects than positive ones. The first thing is that private lessons are usually costly as it requires one tutor for a particular field and there are often more than ten subjects which students have to learn. As a result, a family who has a meager budget cannot afford this way of education. Another reason why parents should not apply this way of teaching is that children cannot receive enough social experiences which they can be provided at school. If students just learn things in theory but not practical ones, they will lack social skills and cannot get on well with the other people. For example, almost homeschooling students tend to be shy and reserved as they might lose the abilities to solve realistic problems. Therefore, in my view, it is more advantageous to send children to school when they are old enough.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there will be more drawbacks than benefits of homeschooling education.
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School is considered as one…
The count of parents who educate their kids themselves at home is considered as one of most prominent issue in the whole world. Despite having some disadvantages ,there are many advantages which we cannot ingnored.
On the one hand, there are some merits .firstly , in these day many of parents want that children do study at home behind this statement there are profound effect . To explain it, there are many parent in some countries who have not only money but also no any facilities for their children's education . As result there are many children who does not recieve the well education and lastly parents decide to instead of going school , they do study of their infants in home . Hence it may be beneficial for every person.
However there are one disadvantages firstly , many parents who are not educate they cannot do study their kids in high schools ,so they cannot teach their children at home because they cannot take place of teachers.
On the other hand, school 's priority is very essential in every person life. Such as one tree does not live without water and sunlight. Following that , children does not live without education. Owing to education become a necessary for every person.if any children when go to school , they learn there(school)many moral value as well as how do behave with each other and discipline also. Moreover they access
well information about any subject without any problem. In addition school is a one type of method with the help of off springs can achieve any success in their life .
To conclude, there are some arguments about this topic.but I also argue that the advantages of the overweight the disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15743440233 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83140967037 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0750844173 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278916259993 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950649023332 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738944855427 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16000031967 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110353598657 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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